Job speech

  
Assignment #4 
Job Speech (INDIVIDUAL)
Part 1 Imagine you are in a Zoom interview for your dream job. In a 1-2 minute speech, respond to the question, ”Why should we hire you for this job?”
If your dream job involves starting your own company, imagine you are speaking to an investor who specializes in your business area and creating a similar speech request an investment or formal mentorship. 
I want the writing to be about this business:

(I’m planning to have a business with my best friend and our envision is owning a restaurant of Mediterranean food. the business will take place at the resting area on the I5 freeway between Fresno and Bakersfield, there are no similar restaurants in the area they only have coffee shops so it less competition. We looking forward to starting it soon. )
The prof feedback : 
(I definitely see your dream but you have a lot of work to do to get this speech organized! Are you looking for an investor? Are you looking for a mentor to help guide you through the process of opening a restaurant? You need to pick a specific person and address your speech to them and the information they would need in order to be willing to help you. Once you do that I think the speech will be clearer and the ideas you need to present about yourself will make more sense. Take a look at the examples and if you have any questions let me know. Your main task is choosing the mentor or investor you are going to address this too.)
Please check the example that I upload 
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